This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hi, my name is Gloria and I am from wigram primary and please accept my comment: wow a good job to you I think I will try that recipe asap, but I think it would be better if you numbered the ingredients and make one step one slide. another great idea would be to add some picture, but keep in mind that I'm not trying to critisize you or anything but if I do I'm sorry. :( (sorry if I write critisize wrong)
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ReplyDeleteThank you for telling me how to make a smoothie
ReplyDeletehi, my name is Gloria and I am from wigram primary and please accept my comment: wow a good job to you I think I will try that recipe asap, but I think it would be better if you numbered the ingredients and make one step one slide. another great idea would be to add some picture, but keep in mind that I'm not trying to critisize you or anything but if I do I'm sorry. :( (sorry if I write critisize wrong)
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